I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
What a brilliant post you’ve made about Shelly-Ann Fraser-Pryce. I didn’t know she had such brightly coloured hair. I like how you’ve incorporated that aspect of her personality into the background of your profile page. Ingenious. I also didn't know she was the third woman to win two consecutive 100m gold medals. She must run so fast, just like a cheetah. Could you tell me any more facts about Shelly-Ann?
Perhaps you could make the text have a black outline and white fill to help it stand out more again the bright background. This would make it easier to read for your readers.
Kia Ora Nikaia,
ReplyDeleteWhat a brilliant post you’ve made about Shelly-Ann Fraser-Pryce. I didn’t know she had such brightly coloured hair. I like how you’ve incorporated that aspect of her personality into the background of your profile page. Ingenious. I also didn't know she was the third woman to win two consecutive 100m gold medals. She must run so fast, just like a cheetah. Could you tell me any more facts about Shelly-Ann?
Perhaps you could make the text have a black outline and white fill to help it stand out more again the bright background. This would make it easier to read for your readers.
Hei konā mai,
Shannon