I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
kia ora, Nikaia my name is Dezray from Paihia School, I like how you added a background to make it more efficient for your writing. This writing reminds me of when I was practicing drop,cover and hold when I was little kid. I found it confusing when It said “if you hear a continuous bell go to the field. I thought you spelled it wrong so alot I had to keep reading it and reading it over and over again but I released you had spelled it correctly. Have you ever been in an earthquake?
thanks for the advice
ReplyDeletekia ora, Nikaia my name is Dezray from Paihia School, I like how you added a background to make it more efficient for your writing. This writing reminds me of when I was practicing drop,cover and hold when I was little kid. I found it confusing when It said “if you hear a continuous bell go to the field. I thought you spelled it wrong so alot I had to keep reading it and reading it over and over again but I released you had spelled it correctly. Have you ever been in an earthquake?
ReplyDeleteHi Dezray,
ReplyDeletethank you for the feed back.
We have just had an earthquake and I was also in the Kaikoura earthquake.
Have you been in one?